Turner, this is very good. The dialogue feels natural. The descriptions are vivid and original. You have a strong voice. You held my attention from the first line. Even though I'm a girl and was homeschooled from the beginning, there's something about Patrick that is very relatable. Looking forward to seeing how you develop this story!
For once I caught something at chapter One, 😂. This was pretty good. I usually just skim other people's stories unless they are super interesting, 🫣 but this held my attention the whole time. I think Hector is probably a lizard. 😂
Pretty sure Hector is a pet lizard or rock or something.
Bruh the elusiveness of hector is plaguing me
Eh… I’ve read enough books that I know how to wait.
Oh my word I somehow missed that this came out 🤦🏼♀️🤦🏼♀️🤦🏼♀️
BUT YAY SO EXCITED TO KEEP READING 🥳🥳🥳
Turner, this is very good. The dialogue feels natural. The descriptions are vivid and original. You have a strong voice. You held my attention from the first line. Even though I'm a girl and was homeschooled from the beginning, there's something about Patrick that is very relatable. Looking forward to seeing how you develop this story!
For once I caught something at chapter One, 😂. This was pretty good. I usually just skim other people's stories unless they are super interesting, 🫣 but this held my attention the whole time. I think Hector is probably a lizard. 😂